The incoming ethereal sounds almost felt like a game of pings bouncing off my glass psyche; I assumed it was playing tricks on me. With my stick in hand, each carefully laid tap on the ground produced reverberations that began to overshadow my conscious reality.
Oh, oh, my sugar must be getting low, was the last thought to myself which made any sense. The insulin shock to my system was giving wicked shots to my brain but numbing me nonetheless. I didn’t even feel the rock splitting open my head as the fleeting thoughts of reality bounded around my skull.
I love how you got all the words in, so unforced, a perfect piece of flash fiction. 🙂❤👩🦰❤
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❤ You're sweet, Carolyn! I appreciate your kind words. 🙂
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❤👩🦰❤
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Wow! Intense story. Great and seamless use of all the prompts
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❤ Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome ☺️
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Wow. That was a shock and surprise ending!
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Glad I could shock you, Val! 😉
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Oh man, that ending. Wasn’t expecting that.
Great writing!
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Glad you enjoyed it, Lucy! 🙂
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