by chance
life begins amongst strangers
a start of birthed possibilities
propelled without consent
entering this world
substantive expectations spur entities on
with an unconscious hope for empathy and guidance
yet living is a potluck
one possibly enjoyed
but for them
probably not
filled with variables beyond their control
with only but a few moments
bent favorably in their direction
too soon
the barely living
trudge towards the inevitable
a half-achieved existence for most
with regret
many pass
with tears
they leave in agony
their death
the unfortunate finish they’d not hoped for
Wow this was intense but beautifully written Susi, loved it! xoxoxo
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So happy it felt that way for you, glad I could convey that. Thanks, Joni! ❤
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Yes I really liked this piece Susi. ❤️🤗
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Beautifully penned, Susi. So pleased my photo inspired such a wonderful piece of writing. Many thanks.
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❤ Thanks, Goff! And I appreciate the inspiration. 🙂
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Thanks, Susi. I appreciate that you wrote the poem. I was deeply touched by the gesture. Have a wonderful day.
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❤️
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Cheers. Happy Monday.
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You too, Goff!
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The sad cycle of reality …
“Baby eyes open and cry
Life’s eyes cry and say goodbye
Old eyes run dry and die”
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Very true and well said, Ivor!
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This is indeed what life is, birth, death and in-between.
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Exactly! Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 😉
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Wonderfully wrought! I love this one!!
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Thank you so much, Val! ❤
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‘With regrets many pass
With tears they live
In agony ‘is my favourite lines from your poem..This is indeed very beautiful poem…We could know the life meaning while reading them..Each And every emotions expressed through your poem… especially last line made me emotional…
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Thank you for your kind words. I’m touched that this piece reached you deeply. ❤
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born and died
tried and true
but only between me and you
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