Inspired by Sadje’s What do you see #81 &
VJ’s Weekly Challenge – What could you talk about for 30 minutes without preparation?
thick green creepers
a beautiful cover
on locked unit 28-5
the lush foliage slyly hides
the horrors
behind those doors
mutti wouldn’t approve
barring anyone entrance
revealing her shameful secrets
**VJ’s prompt – For those who are unaware of my dysfunctional relationship with my mother, Mutti would be the topic I could speak about without preparation for at least 30 minutes, if not a lifetime.
Beautifully written. For many of our mothers, it was all about hiding.
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I think you’re right, Annette. Thank you!
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Yes, I see how it screams horror at the onset. I thought of escape as well. Hope the horror ended when she found a way to get away. Lovely. Just so lovely. Thanks, Susi. I enjoyed reading this. Be well. I wish you miracles.
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As her daughter, yes, I got away. Thanks, Selma!
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Good for you, and I bet she got her just punishment. So be it.
Love the happy ending. Keep shining. Keep soaring — you got wings.
I bless you.
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Thanks, Selma!
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Sad but beautifully written.
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Thank you, Pooja!
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My pleasure!
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Very moving poem Susi. Thanks for joining in
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Thanks, Sadje! My pleasure, always. 🙂
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You’re welcome my friend
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*no words – only hugs*
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❤ Thank you, Val!
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Lol. The stuff of horror..
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Lol yup!
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