My friend Chuck, from The Reluctant Poet, challenged me to finish two Elfchens he started. I happily obliged to collaborate and finish them. Apparently, he liked them and recommended I share them with my readers. I hope you like them!
When
He Whispered
In My Ear
my heart opened right
up
~~~
When
I Pretend
my credibility nosedives
ego takes a hit
fraud
These are wonderful, Susi!
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Thank you! β€
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Excellent collaboration, Susi, and Chuck!
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Thanks, Eugenia! π
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come enjoy the elfchens I tempted Susi to finish! She did Great!!
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A new form for me. I like how there is a kind of turn in each – gives them depth!
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You’re right, Val. I’ve not done many of them. I credit Chuck for pulling me into that direction. π
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Very good Susi. Thinking on the same wavelength
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Thank you, Sadje! Yeah, I’m finding that more often than not. π
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Youβre welcome!πππ
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Well done Susi and Chuck, they are quite a contrast…
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It’s all about balance, isn’t it? π
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I think I’m lacking balance π€
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Stick with me, kid! I’ve worked diligently on that super power. π
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Ok… I’ll go drag out my old magic tightrope and balancing bar kit… π
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