our existence is pure chance
from the first breath to the last
…we begin to emerge
we reside in our hulls
as best we can
…we accept our fate
no destiny is foretold
it would be a lie
…we begin to build our futures
the influences we encounter
shape our course
...we put the pieces together
our existence in this world
a compilation of experiences
…we accept or reject what we encounter
this being of our own making
punctuated by false starts
…we are the entity we discovered
years of facing trials
and joys captured in moments
…we become
a lifetime to savor through memories
a person determined
Thank you, Akshita, for inspiring these thoughts!
Beautifully written!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Love the way you have formatted this powerful piece!
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Thanks, Jaya! It felt like it needed that format to emphasize the points. Glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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Such inspiring thoughts Susi. I’m filled with so much positive vibes after reading this piece. Also, a big thanks for mentioning me too. I’m so glad for that.🥰
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Thank you, Akshita! A big thanks to YOU for your piece. I’m glad it stimulated the creative wheels further! 🙂
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It was such a pleaure reading, Susi.
I’m so honoured to hear these words from you🥰
It really did. Keep on stimulating them for infinities🙂❤
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❤ Will do! 🙂
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Sound thoughts, beautifully stated. And no, no destiny is foretold. It is all down to what we do and what others do, and how we react to what life throws at us.
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Appreciate it! 🙂
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This is a beautiful expression of evolution, Susi!
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Thanks, Eugenia! I appreciate it!
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Most welcome, Susi!
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Evocative
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❤ Thanks, Jude!
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Loving the analogy, comparing us to butterflies… very inspirational…
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I thought that picture captured it well! Thanks!
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So much truths in your lines. Very well written.
We are outcomes of our sum experiences and reaction to them. Very deep.
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Thanks, Kevin. Yes, we are! 🙂
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A beautiful synopsis of life.
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Thanks, Sadje! ❤
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You’re welcome Susi
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