Inspired by Sadje’s What do you see #51, Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – Foresight &
VJ’s Weekly Challenge – Reason
we watched the grains of sand dwindle
even with foresight and understanding
the reason our bodies have given up
is not a mystery
death is upon us
time has run out
it’s useless reaching up at dusk
to reverse course
#Whatdoyousee
Beautiful and terse.🧡
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Awww, Jude! Thank you. My goal is always to achieve that. ❤
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My pleasure Susi 🧡
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Superb take on the prompt!
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Thanks, Silver Stone! I’m glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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You’re very welcome! 😄
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Perfect 🙂
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Appreciate it, Chris! 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Death is inevitable. Great take on the prompt, Susi
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Thank you, Shweta! 🙂
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Time is eternally passing , slipping away. So well said Susi. Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Thank you so much, Sadje! 🙂
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You’re most welcome
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Yes, I’m hoping for more time, as well, however, on my terms. An excellent and mind-stirring piece, Susi!
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Who knows? My son keeps telling me medically we could eventually life forever. Thanks, Eugenia!
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👻
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LOL
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You are right it is no mystery – still, I’m hoping for more time.
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Same! 🙂
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Nice combining of the prompts!!
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Thanks, Val! 🙂
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