
VJ’s Weekly Challenge #112 – Take Care
home sweet home
you feel so far away
on this sad and lonely journey
traversing these difficult roads
trying to take care
as i find my way back
to your comfort and protection
#Whatdoyousee
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This is so beautiful..Glad I’m followed your blog and will read all yours upcoming updates …
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Dakshali, you honor me. Thank you so much for the follow! 🙂 I look forward to your comments.
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Sure.. Mam !😁
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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So soft and sweet, it makes you want to be in a comfy, loving home.
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Absolutely! 🙂 Glad it made you feel that!
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I love when my writing touches someone…You know pieces are just for fun but it is nice to get the feedback.
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Some pieces are just for fun is what I meant…
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I’m confused? You said “So soft and sweet, it makes you want to be in a comfy, loving home.” that’s what I responded to.
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Sorry, that is just that my response to you was so confusingly and poorly written. You were spot on because I just dragged out my comment and made it about something totally different. Lol, I go off on tangents sometimes and think that people should be able to follow this twisted maze I call my mind!!
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LOL No worries! Just wanted to make sure I understood. 🙂
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Heartfelt words and feelings, Susi.
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Thank you, Kim. Don’t we all just want to feel like we’ve found the place we’re meant to be?
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We do. But sometimes it’s complicated.
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Yes, you are so right!
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A lovely poem, liked the emotion
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Appreciate that, Jude! 🙂
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This is so Beautiful…the feeling depicted by the words matches the pic so wonderfully; as if you can feel the traveller muttering to self as he/she walks forward!
Loved this. 🙂
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Oh, Goutam! Thank you for your comment and kindness. ❤
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Ah, the yearning to reach home is so intense at such times….beautiful blend of prompts Susi 🙂
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Indeed it is, especially when you haven’t found one yet. Thanks, Radhika! 🙂
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This was beautiful!
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Thank you, Pooja! 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Perfect blending of the prompts. A lovely poem Susi. Thanks for including my prompt too.
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My pleasure, Sadje! Thanks!
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😉😉
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It is so difficult to find your way home. Sadly sometimes home has disappeared in the shifting sands…
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That is very true. Sometimes we have to find a new home.
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Home sweet home, whether physical or mental, is much needed during these difficult times. Beautifully penned, Susi, and thank you for joining in.
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Thanks, Eugenia! Yes, indeed – safety, comfort and feeling settled.
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We all long for home…
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Yes, we do, Jorge! 🙂
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The search and longing for home seems to be a universal theme. Well written, Susi.
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Thanks so much, VJ! Indeed!
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Welcome!
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you so much, Isaiah!
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