
Inspired by Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – Transition, VJ’s Weekly Challenge #110 – Smell &
Sadje’s What do you see #44
like winter to spring
i can smell the transition
to new beginnings
my joyful anticipation
making me erupt
in a spontaneous dance
the water spraying
in an exulting expression
delighting in my future
…the hereafter looks promising
#Whatdoyousee
‘I can smell the transition lovely line. The picture and the poetry go perfectly well together.
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I love when images inspire me! This is why I enjoy doing the prompts so much. Thanks, Smitha! 🙂
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Fine poem with excellent choice of accompanying image! Be well.
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Thank you so much, Jorge! 🙂
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what a lovely mashed up of prompts Susi
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Thanks, Mich! 🙂 I look forward to these every week.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Beautiful writing
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Thank you, Jude! 🙂
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What a splendid poem Susi ..
“like winter to spring
i can smell the transition
to new beginnings”
These lines just made my day !! Beautiful 🙂 ❤
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I’m so happy that you enjoyed this, Nima! ❤
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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This is wonderful Susi!
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So happy you enjoyed it, Tina! 🙂
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So beautiful 💜
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Thank you! 🙂
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💜💜
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I do like the energy of these words. Thank you dear Susi for sharing the amazing poetry.
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Thanks, John! I appreciate your kind words! 🙂
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You are welcome dear Susi.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Wonderful words and photo shared.
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As spring arrives here, your poem really reflects the way I’m feeling to day 🙂
Here’s to hope!
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Absolutely! Gotta have it! 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thank you, David! 🙂
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What a joyous and buoyant poem. Thanks a lot Susi for joining in the challenge
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Thanks, Sadje! Happy to! 🙂
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😍💙
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Good analogy – it’s true Spring has a hopeful, uplifting smell.
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Glad you liked it, VJ! 🙂
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I did! Always know to expect something good from you, Susi!
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((hugs)) Thanks, VJ!
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Welcome!
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An apt description of the photo prompt. I love the first stanza – completely made my heart beat faster!
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Thank you!! 🙂
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Excellent take on the prompts and what a beautifully flowing piece. Thank you for joining in, Susi.
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Beautiful poetry.>💖
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Thanks so much, Suzette! ❤
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My pleasure Susi🙏🌸
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