Here is the 3rd piece accepted at Pure Haiku! 🙂
patiently waiting
luminescent barriers
i am next inline
© Susi Bocks 2020
Currently, I’m inhabiting this world wearing many labels that don’t truly do justice to who I am as a person.
This haiku is part of our theme of Translucent.
I Write Her 
Superb Haiku!
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❤ Thank you so much for this praise, Eugenia! 🙂
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You’re most welcome, Susi!
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OH, THAT takes the haiku notion of the surprise Iado, single-draw.stroke-head-lopping off-To-return to scabbard-lighting-strike in one motion of a Haiku’s last line braced solidly on the foundation of the 1st 2 lines… and nails it! Love it!
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😁 Thanks, Jordan! Glad you enjoyed it!
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Please know I may be gone from social media but I will be reading you and I love you and support you 100 percent and always will.
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❤ You are precious, Candice!! ❤
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Another good one Susi.
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❤ Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 😉
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