18 thoughts on “The Waves”

  4. Powerful deceptive simplicity. A wonderful, evocative, expansive, robust world of feeling harmonized into life by a 9 word alchemical choir fluid in their resonance as they magically mix clear, emotional expression.

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      3. I’m currently enjoying not limiting the expansive ambiguity, simply steeping in it. Though I’m not familiar with the Senryu form,, there is a haiku-like Iado sword-strike in the last line fully bringing it home. Splendor and honesty, though, are words I’ll use.

        Splendor.
        Honesty.

        In 9 words you expressed The Nin, The Tao. 9 words with an inter-related dynamism. I smile that I have so many more words than your 9 words to describe your 9-word creation. Such a seed bursting open, so natural. Such a catalyst.

        In short. Thank you.

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