raging emotions
feelings bottled up inside
they landed elsewhere
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raging emotions
feelings bottled up inside
they landed elsewhere
Image credit – pxhere.com
https://pxhere.com/en/photo/1162238
https://pxhere.com/en/photo/799962
https://pxhere.com/en/photo/1033649
Anger always lands where we least intended them to fall upon
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Yes, so true.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Emotions beautifully expressed, Susi!
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The images were the catalyst. 😊 Glad you enjoyed it!
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Powerful deceptive simplicity. A wonderful, evocative, expansive, robust world of feeling harmonized into life by a 9 word alchemical choir fluid in their resonance as they magically mix clear, emotional expression.
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Thank you, Jordan! 🙂
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You are very welcome, Susi! 🙂 I’m plussed at 9 words living in such verdant harmony. Wonderful piece.
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Cool.
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I’m currently enjoying not limiting the expansive ambiguity, simply steeping in it. Though I’m not familiar with the Senryu form,, there is a haiku-like Iado sword-strike in the last line fully bringing it home. Splendor and honesty, though, are words I’ll use.
Splendor.
Honesty.
In 9 words you expressed The Nin, The Tao. 9 words with an inter-related dynamism. I smile that I have so many more words than your 9 words to describe your 9-word creation. Such a seed bursting open, so natural. Such a catalyst.
In short. Thank you.
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Beautiful ♥️
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Thanks! 😊
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Beautifully expressed emotions
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Thank you, Sadje! 🙂
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You’re welcome Susi.
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Beautiful Susi. Really beautiful.
xoxoxo
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❤ Gabriela 🙂
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Plenty of love right back to you 🙂
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