
Who
sorts out
the poet
giving a voice
to your unuttered
despair left in the wake?
I cannot run to you now.
We survived the end of our world,
unfortunately not each other.
Paths once united, just dust from our past.
Who
sorts out
the poet
giving a voice
to your unuttered
despair left in the wake?
I cannot run to you now.
We survived the end of our world,
unfortunately not each other.
Paths once united, just dust from our past.
This is such a splendor piece of work –
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Appreciate your kind words, Shantanu. 🙂
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My absolute pleasure
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Don’t Miss Susi’s great poem!!!
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OMG, Susi!! This is such a stunning poem!! So deep, moving and filled with the pain of the truth!!!
I Adored your last lines – Wow!
We survived the end of our world,
unfortunately not each other.
Paths once united, just dust from our past.
I’m depositing these in my word bank as a gem of inspiration and hoping for a blossom someday soon!!! Your ending really playing rough and hard on my heartstrings!!! Please consider this a candidate for the “Best of Susi” book!!
Loved the photo too – really captured the feel – walking away in the wind!! Stunning!!
Bellissimo, Susi, simply Bellissimo!!
I told you that you had a gem and just as I was getting ready to hit post comment I read your last three lines again and Wham! I got something. I guess this is what the good part of fishing feels like. I will send you a copy on email. Thank You, Thank You, Thank You!!! Here is my definition of a good/great poet – “A good poet’s words reach out and touch the heart of the reader and make them glad they read the poem”!! Five stars for You, Susi!! 💖💖💖💋💋🌹😃
xoxoxo
Chuck
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You humble me, dearest Chuck! Thank you so much for your love and support! **Blush
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Ha! Don’t blush, My Dear!! Bask in the praise and glory of how your words reached out and touched my heart!!! I can only tell you it is magic when someone’s words inspire your heart and soul and plant a seed of inspiration that blossoms into a poem. You are now one of my “Inspirators”!! It is really super when what you wrote does this to someone. I have had it happen a few times and there is nothing quite like it!! So happy to have this happen to you, Dear Susi!!
🌹😁😘💖
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I am, I am! Thank you, Chuck!!<3
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Found it, finally – A Distant Mirage! Thanks, Dear!!
xoxo
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❤️
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Beautiful.
Just dust…
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Thank you, Kritika!!
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love! ❤
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Thanks so much, Penny! ❤
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