i look at my hands
and discover
they’re her hands
my veins
are not as plump
nor as soft
as a young child
her hands
gave me comfort
her veins
were my toy
to rub for hours
this one allowed act
was solace for me
for her too it seemed
a simple act
of touch
we both needed
the affection stopped
as i grew older
and we moved far away
other memories
were of rigidity and coldness
and superficial acknowledgment
when i found she wrote poetry
i realized
another connection
remembering
her hands
brings me closer still
Perfect for the prompt!! I remember my great grandmother’s hands as well…
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Oh this is so beautiful my friend. I just love it and relate to it as well. Moving those wiggly veins on the thinning skin on her old hands. This is gorgeous and so touching. I imagine it brings back many memories of loved ones to many people who read this piece. Thank you so much for sending me this link. It is really special. Have a wonderful evening my friend. Love and Hugs Joni
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Thank you for your kind words, Joni! I’m glad it resonated with you. I wish you the same! ❤
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🤗💕 Yes, it is a very happy memory I have of her making biscuits. She had a face like an angel even though she was very old. Thank you again. ❤️Joni
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Awwwww! ❤
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💕❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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What a heartfelt and lovely piece, Susi!
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❤️
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It’s a lovely piece, Susi. That even in the coldness that was there you still remember the kind moments you shared and know that they are the most important ones.
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You have to take them wherever you find them!
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This is so beautiful, Susi. And we seem to be in the same place right now; my grandmother, who passed last spring, would have been 100 this past Saturday. She was my great friend growing up and an inspiration even now. Much needed memories in these times!
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Glad it touched you, Sun! Sorry for your loss.
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❤️ very touching
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Thank you, Jude! ❤️
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I looked at my hand after seeing this. I’m getting there too🙂. It filled me with warmth too. Thank you for sharing it with us.❤
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These hands and this poem made me think of my grandmother – soft and kind with the vein popping out.
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❤ This is my hand but looking at it today reminded me of my grandmother. It was a good memory and filled me with inspiration and warmth. 🙂
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What a lovely piece
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Thank you!! 🙂
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So beautiful and heartfelt. This is a lovely poem.
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Thank you, Haley! I’m glad you liked it!
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You’re most welcome! Thank you for sharing your lovely writing! 💗
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❤️
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✨💖
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Your poem is beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Barbara! Thanks for your kind thoughts. 🙂
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Beautiful piece here.
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Appreciate it! 🙂
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Caring hands…
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Thank you!! 🙂
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Your grandma?
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Yes, she was my Oma! 🙂
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Lovely.
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Thanks!
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A pleasure Susi.
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