
“Okay, start at the beginning,” said Detective Jones. “Where did you find this ring?”
“In the lounge,” saying it with a blink.
Detective Jones proclaimed loudly, “Right, and I’m still the King of England!” He began to pump his fists agitatedly.
“Son, I do not need a crystal ball to predict what will happen here,” he said. “You’re acting like the lone wolf, but we know the fix you are in, so stop this stone-walling.”
“Officer, check the security tapes of the lounge. It happened just like I said. I saw a shimmer, then bent to pick up the ring.”
Wow! Well done, Susi!
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Thank you so much, Eugenia! Your praise means a lot to me! ❤
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It is well-deserved, Susi!
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❤
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Enticing 👌
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Thanks, Kritika! I like that description! 🙂
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Well done! 🙂
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Thanks so much, Bette! ❤
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Nicely done!
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Appreciate that, Violet! 🙂
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very good Susi! love how you set this scene with all those words.
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Thanks, Gina! Appreciate it. 🙂
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Love these! This one is your best so far. 👏😊
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Thanks, Nan! ❤
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Interesting!
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Thanks, Lucy! 🙂
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