
sharing space
with another
honestly
requires more than love
it’s a willingness
to let go
of one’s shield
diligently erected
a wanting
to feel the richness
of another’s essence
perhaps damaged
a deep need
to be enmeshed
on all the levels
partners wish to be seen
it’s a pact
for the happiness
of the other
in this dance of two beings
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Your poem fits too! It is a woman either welcoming her soldier home or sending him off!
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Thanks, Ruth! 🙂
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I’ve been there! This is a very tall sculpture in St Pancras station, London! I have photos! I love it
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Very cool, I’ll have to put it on my bucket list. 🙂
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This speaks volumes, Susi! So true!
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Thank you, Eugenia! ❤
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Most welcome!
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Lovely poem. The line that really caught me was “It’s a pact for the happiness of the other.” So true and yet still rare. So many people who “chase” love want it for the wrong reasons. “If I get her then I’ll be happy.” Never considering the “other’s” happiness.
Thanks for sharing.
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Definitely rare! Thanks for stopping by, Paul! 🙂
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Aha! Maybe that’s why I never quite got it right….
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I think it takes two to get it right. Don’t be so hard on yourself, Violet! 🙂
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Hi, Susi. Happy Monday. Love this poem. A great piece of writing. Many Thanks for sharing. Goff
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Hey, Goff! Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the kind words! 🙂
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My pleasure.Beat Regards.
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You’ve got that just right.
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❤ Thanks, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 👍
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I love this Statue, always feel compelled to go and visit it when I’m nearby x
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How wonderful you get to see it up close and personal! 🙂
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Your beautiful words express this so wonderfully. I’ll make a point of swinging by at the weekend, tell the statue that it is a source of inspiration x
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Thank you! Enjoy your visit! 🙂
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Beautiful words written.
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Thank you so much!
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