whisps of emotion
congest inside me
longing to reach
for you
so close
so intense
you don’t
even know it
carrying a torch
unseen
bursting bright
when you are near
this is not
a passing fancy
and this is not
going away
i’ve got a thing for you
Loved this! What a wonderful twist – nice to be able to take this more than one way, eh? Ha!
xoxoxo
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Glad you enjoyed it, Chuck! 🙂 Absolutely, the comprehension is in the eye of the beholder! lol
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Ha! Well? Hmm? I got two. How many did you hide??
xoxoxo
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Well, it actually started out as one meaning but it seems you and another reader (maybe more?!?) got two as well. 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Mind-stirring! Well done, Susi!
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Oh, I like that compliment! Thanks, Eugenia! 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Chocolate is always there for you, unlike some humans. The picture made me smile after reading the poem.
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Yes, it is! Glad it made you smile. This is the beauty of creating pieces. But also, that what is penned could be a completely different message! 😉
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Good one!
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Thanks, Sadje! 🙂
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A pleasure
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😁
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