Big shoutout to Luna for publishing my piece Cold on The Poetry Bar! ❤
you threw the first rock
the force of it landed
the pain came in slivers
you broke open
love’s shelter
it’s no longer safe here
our warmth escaped
cold steeliness seeped in
my blood curdled icy
Susi Bocks began her writing career later in life after her children were raised and had begun their own life journey. Author of published two books – Feeling Human and Every Day I Pause – you can read and get to know her at IWriteHer.com or follow on Facebook here https://www.facebook.com/MyHumanityInWrittenForm/
If you would like to have your work published in The Poetry Bar send your poem, a few words about yourself and the link to your blog and Instagram (if you have one) to the e-mail poetrybar1@gmail.com
Wow! I’m impressed! This is one of the best I’ve seen from you so far. Excellent!
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That means a lot to me, Nan! ❤ Thank you!
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Congratulations 👌
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Thanks! 🙂
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Congratulations Susi xo 🙂
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Thanks, Jen! 🙂
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You deserve every bit of praise Susi 🙂 xo
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You’re so kind, Jen! I appreciate your support! 🙂
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Me speaks true LOL xo
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❤
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