
get under
my
taut, aching skin
wrap your thoughts
in
my brain matter
desire my
skin
be upon yours
be one with
me
want what I want
get under
my
taut, aching skin
wrap your thoughts
in
my brain matter
desire my
skin
be upon yours
be one with
me
want what I want
Beautiful and sensual. You have such a way with words! π
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How kind, Haley, thank you! β€
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Aw, you’re very welcome! π
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Amazing poem from first stanza to last!!! Oh so sensuous, sexy and romantic too! My first reaction was – Mmmmmm!
xoxoxo
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Makes me think “yummy”! π Glad you liked it, Chuck!
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A nice rendering of desiring. I like it π
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So glad you enjoyed it, David! π
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Concise and to the point. Well done, Susi!
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Mission accomplished! π
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Great elegant words to accompany and describe photo!!
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β€οΈ Thank you, Ruth!
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