Cold

you threw the first rock
the force of it landed
the pain came in slivers

you broke open
love’s shelter
it’s no longer safe here

our warmth escaped
cold steeliness seeped in
my blood curdled icy

5 thoughts on “Cold”

awisewomansjourney says:

April 10, 2019 at 9:43 am

Wow! My blood curdled icy–powerful! ❤

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1. Susi Bocks says:
  
  April 10, 2019 at 10:08 am
  
  Thanks, Deborah! ❤
  
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-Eugenia says:

April 10, 2019 at 9:22 am

Whoa! I got the shivers reading this. Well done, Susi!

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1. Susi Bocks says:
  
  April 10, 2019 at 10:09 am
  
  Thanks for the compliment, Eugenia! ❤
  
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  1. -Eugenia says:
    
    April 11, 2019 at 8:41 am
    
    Most welcome!
    
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