Inspired by Hélène Vaillant – What Do You See 1/22/19
beautiful white snow
deceiving
in the dark night
icy and cold
chilled to the bone
layers, way too many
your world is sunny
rather visit there
wanting to thaw out
beautiful white sand
inviting
in the bright day
oh, do let me come stay with you!
I Write Her 
I got wonderfully lost in the feeling of warmth.
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I’m so glad you felt the warmth of this piece! 🙂 Thanks for stopping in to read. 🙂
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You’re welcome
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Wonderful Poem, Susi!!
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Thank you, Jordy! Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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😊
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Really captures the world through a child’s eyes 🙂
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Yes! Glad you enjoyed it, Bernie. 🙂
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i love the way you described the standing on the threshold but not ever saying it, even without the photo your woerds conveyed a longing for something better and warmer, very inspiring words!
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Thank you, Gina! I appreciate your kind words. So glad you enjoyed it! 🙂
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very much! i will continue to visit and read be sure of that, though slow I will!
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❤
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A lovely and inspiring poem Susi ! Image is so beautiful,It took me back to my childhood.
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Thank you, Rajesh! That’s a little bit where I went with it especially with the title. I distinctly remember asking that question on road trips from the backseat of my parents’ car. 🙂
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Ohhh you made me wanna open my door for you…this is a funfilled poem
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Thank you for the invite! 🙂 Yes, it was fun but real.
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Yes! 🙂
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LOL not here!! You must be closer to the equator! 😉
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You capture the charming spirit of the image well.
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Thanks, Suzanne! I’m glad you enjoyed it. 🙂 It was a fun one to ponder on!
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A lovely poem Susi. I love the playful mood while at the same time you instill a wise message of lightening your wares to step into a brighter day. Thank you.
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Thanks! I loved the image! 🙂
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My pleasure.
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🙂
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Beautiful
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Thank you! 🙂
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